Your analysis of Incention is competent, you pickup on many of the elements within the opening that contribute to meaning. However it needs mor work. When you say the shots switch rapidly, you could improve this by making it clear you understand this is editing.
You should also use DISTINCT
Don't
Ignore
Setting
Technical code
Iconography
Narrative
Characterisation
Themes
You probably covered the setting and technical code (but it needs more mise en scene and editing discussion) but there is little for the rest of the areas.
Level 2/3 border. These improvements would secure a good level 3
Angus, thongs and perfect snogging
Again a decent analysis, and you go further into the DISTINCT formula. go ovet this again and see if you cna cover the areas you have missed (themes and some of the technical code as well as iconography) also can you change eye birds view to birds eye view...
Similar level to above.
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